Demo Day Pitch Script Audit
Check a spoken pitch for timing and clarity.
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Audit the script of my three-minute pitch. Script text: [PITCH_SCRIPT]. Slides used: [SLIDES]. Audience: [AUDIENCE]. Time each part by word count at a natural pace, mark sentences that are hard to say aloud, jargon, numbers that need a visual, and places where I repeat the slide instead of adding to it. Check the opening line and the final ask. Return a timing table, a score from 1 to 10 for clarity, pace and memorability, and a trimmed script that fits the time using only my facts. Include three practice drills. Also mark where to pause, which numbers to say slowly, and which sentence to cut first if time runs short. Provide a version of the closing line that states the ask clearly, and a list of three questions the audience might ask after the pitch with short honest answers drawn from my material. Suggest a practice routine of three timed run-throughs and what to record each time.
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